Peer Reviews

The main things that I took away from all of the peer reviews that were made was that my role wasn't as strong as my team believed. Our plot could have used a little more detail to strengthen it. This was one of the major points that were brought up as I was reading the peer reviews. One idea that we came up with if we had the ability to edit was record a shot of me waking up from having a vision and journaling what i saw instead of just being in the courtyard drawing the eyes of a stalker. This will help eliminate confusion about our story line and help strengthen it. There wasn't really any other elements of our film that our peers mentioned.